Discussion Board 2
Prompt: You are medical student applying for a competitive internship in cardiovascular treatment and surgery, but you must submit a petition for the
anch you wish to intern with. Your petition must include a detailed description of the cardiovascular disease that is your primary area of interest, your knowledge of cu
ent research, and ideas for new treatment methods and/or future research.
Based on these symptoms, choose one disease to specialize in:
1. Myocardial infarction
2. Hemo
hagic cere
ovascular accident
3. Ischemic cere
ovascular accident
Through this 2-part discussion with your classmates, you will explain the disease, why you chose it using appropriate and sufficient evidence, and your ideas for future research, treatment options, etc. Your explanation should include the cause of the disease, impact on the anatomy and physiology of the body, demographics, symptoms, any cu
ent research, course of treatment and/or surgical options, and prognosis.
You will respond to your classmates’ posts to convince them why they should also specialize in your disease and compare treatment ideas. You may also be convinced by a classmate to switch your initial disease choice or to consider other treatment concepts.
Remember, no disease is a wrong choice, but you should approach this as if you are deciding what you want to work on throughout your career and what direction you want to take your research.
Initial Post (Worth up to 70 points)
· Length: XXXXXXXXXXwords
· 12pt font
· All sources (3 required) must be properly cited (see APA source citation below)
· State and explain your choice. When stating the evidence, consider the challenges that others may have to your evidence and how you could counter those respectful challenges.
APA Source Citation
You must use at least 3 reputable scientific references to support your post (not including your textbook- if you use your textbook, you must also cite it). Reputable sources= peer reviewed scientific journal articles, accredited websites, or books. Google, Wikipedia, etc. are not acceptable sources.
Your information must be credible, accurate, and well supported by evidence. The best sources of information are the research journals and the books as well as webpages maintained by professional societies and organizations. Search for articles and academic material should start with the electronic databases of li
aries such as FTCC’s Paul H. Thompson Li
ary (opens new window), PubMed (opens new window) or other such resources. When in doubt about material, use CARS checklist (opens new window) to see if it can be used in discussions and writings.
You must cite all sources, both as and work cited and in-text. Citation format must be APA (See examples below). If you need more information, visit the Purdue Owl Writing Lab (opens new window) for instructions on proper formatting.
Works Cited References
Website
Format
Lastname, F. M. (Year, Month Date). Title of page. Site name. URL
Example
Price, D. (2018, March 23). Laziness does not exist. Medium. https:
humanparts.medium.com/laziness-does-not-exist-3af27e312d01
Scientific Journal Articles
Format
Author, A. A., Author, B. B., & Author, C. C. (Year). Title of article. Title of Periodical, volume number(issue number), pages. https:
doi.org/xx.xxx/yyyy
Print Journal Example
Scruton, R XXXXXXXXXXThe eclipse of listening. The New Criterion, 15(3), 5–13.
Electronic Journal Example
Baniya, S., & Weech, S. (2019). Data and experience design: Negotiating community-oriented digital research with service-learning. Purdue Journal of Service-Learning and International Engagement, 6(1), 11–16. https:
doi.org/10.5703/ XXXXXXXXXX
Book
Format
Author, A. A. (Year of publication). Title of work: Capital letter also for subtitle. Publisher Name.
Example
Malory, T XXXXXXXXXXLe morte darthur (P. J. C. Field, Ed.). D. S. Brewer. (Original work published XXXXXXXXXX)
In-Text Citations (must co
espond to reference in works cited section)
When paraphrasing format= Author-Date
Example: (Jones, 1998)
When Quoting= Author-Date-Page Number(s)
Example: (Jones, 1998, p. 199) or (Jones, 1998, pp. 199–201)
Responses (Worth up to 30 points)
Respond to at least 2 classmate’s discussion submissions.
· Each response must be XXXXXXXXXXwords (12pt font)!
· Evaluate their post. You are either adding more evidence to a post that made the same choice as you or challenging another choice (respectfully) with evidence.
· Offer questions or responses to what is said. Offer Research that backs or refutes a point being made (“Good Jobs”, or “I agree” are NOT allowed as your response!!). Your response should add to the body of knowledge in the class.
Discussion Board Ru
ic
Use the following ru
ic to write your post AND to respond to your peers. I will also use this same ru
ic to grade your post and responses!
· Initial Post= 70pts
· Explanation= 40pts
· 40pts= Clear, strong, and supported position for the chosen disease with a thorough explanation of the disease. Includes 100% of the following: cause of the disease, impact on the anatomy and physiology of the body, demographics, symptoms, any cu
ent research, a course of treatment, and a prognosis.
· 30pts= Clear, supported position for the chosen disease with a thorough explanation of the disease. Includes 75% of the following: the cause of the disease, impact on the anatomy and physiology of the body, demographics, symptoms, any cu
ent research, a course of treatment, and a prognosis.
· 25pts= Position for the chosen disease is stated with a
ief explanation. Includes 50% of the following: cause of the disease, impact on the anatomy and physiology of the body, demographics, symptoms, any cu
ent research, a course of treatment, and a prognosis.
· 15pts= Position for the chosen disease is stated without explanation. Includes at least 25% of the following: cause of the disease, impact on the anatomy and physiology of the body, demographics, symptoms, any cu
ent research, a course of treatment, and a prognosis.
· 10pts= Clear position for the chosen disease is not stated. Includes less than 25% of the following: cause of the disease, impact on the anatomy and physiology of the body, demographics, symptoms, any cu
ent research, a course of treatment, and a prognosis.
· 5pts= Explanation is unclear, incomplete, and not supported.
· 0pts= No explanation.
· Sources= 15pts
· 15pts= The required number of sources are provided (minimum of 3, not including textbook). All sources used for quotes, statistics, and facts are credible and cited co
ectly. Citations are both in-text and in the works cited section.
· 12pts= The required number of sources are provided (minimum of 3, not including textbook). Most sources used for quotes, statistics, and facts are credible and cited co
ectly. Citations are either only in-text or in the works cited section, but not both.
· 10pts= Only 2 sources are provided. Not all sources used are credible and/or not all are cited co
ectly. Citations are both in-text and in the works cited section.
· 7pts= Only 2 sources are provided. Not all sources used are credible and/or not all are cited co
ectly. Citations are either only in-text or in the works cited section, but not both.
· 5pts= Only 1 source is provided. Not all sources used are credible and/or not all are cited co
ectly. Citations are both in-text and in the works cited section.
· 3pts= Only 1 source is provided. Not all sources used are credible and/or not all are cited co
ectly. Citations are either only in-text or in the works cited section, but not both.
· 0pts= Sources are not cited at all, are not credible, and/or are not cited co
ectly.
· Length/ Gramma
Spelling = 15pts
· 15pts= Post is of required length XXXXXXXXXXwords). Less than 10% of e
ors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content.
· 12pts= Post is approximately 75% of the required length. 10% of e
ors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content.
· 10pts= Post is approximately 50% of the required length. 30% of e
ors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content.
· 7pts= Post is approximately 25% of required length. 50% of e
ors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content.
· 5pts= Post less than 25% of the required length. 70% of e
ors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content.
· 3pts= Post is less than 10% of the required length. 90% of e
ors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content.
· 0pts= No post.
· Responses= 30pts
· 30pts= Two responses and each meets the required length XXXXXXXXXXwords). Comments add to the classroom discussion and are thoughtful, reflective, and respectful of other’s postings.
· 25pts= Two responses and only one meets the required length XXXXXXXXXXwords). Comments add to the classroom discussion and are thoughtful, reflective, and respectful of other’s postings.
· 20pts= Two responses, but neither meets the required length XXXXXXXXXXwords). Comments add to the classroom discussion and are thoughtful, reflective, and respectful of other’s postings
· 15pts= Only one response is posted, but meets the required length XXXXXXXXXXwords). Comments add to the classroom discussion, but only minimally reflect the topic or the other student’s posting.
· 10pts= Only one response is posted and it does not meet the required length XXXXXXXXXXwords). Comments are not reflective of the topic or other student’s posting.
· 5pts= Only one response is used and/or shows a minimum effort in reading and understanding other student’s post. (e.g. "I agree with Bill")
· 0pts= No responses.
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