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Correct the essay with the professor instructions draft3
You have to change all the comments she said :You are not responding to my comments. For example, I told you on your first draft that "fulfilling Legal obligations" is not something that only progressive companies do. In fact, ALL companies must follow legal obligations!!! Here is what I wrote on your last draft: "Your intro and conclusion are good. I don't think fulfilling legal obligations is working here, though. Every company, progressive or not, has to fulfill legal obligations. Maybe you want to say that progressive companies fulfill not only legal obligations but philanthropic ones as well." Also, you were supposed to contain two examples from at least two different companies to support your topic sentences. I wrote that on your first draft as well. Here is what I wrote: "Also, your body paragraphs have some good general support, but you must also include examples of what two or more specific companies do. That is you should describe the initiatives. Read the attached essay to see how it works." This is a reading class as well as a writing class. If you do not or cannot read and follow the directions, you cannot pass the class. If you fix this, you can resubmit it as your second draft. When you have done that, I will correct it for grammar.

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Socially Responsible Companies		2
SOCIALLY RESPONSIBLE COMPANIES
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Essay	3
References	7
Essay 
Every business runs for profitability purposes. For a business to be successful, it needs to supply quality goods and provide good services that are desired by the public. It is evident that today’s business dynamism assesses the business performance of a company not only by its operational and financial performance but also according to the activities that are conducted by the organization. This refers to the social responsibility that the company must give special attention to. The increased aspect of globalization and intensified competition in the market helped compel the company to operate to create a brand image. Social responsibility is defined by the set of commitments that a business is prepared to implement in order to strengthen the community in which it is operating. Thecompanies that are socially responsible operate effectively and potentially take care of their employees, environment, and society. This essay focuses on these aspects of socially responsible companies. 
Employees’ welfare is an important agenda for progressive companies. Managers of such companies understand that the motivation of their employees is an important thing. The best way to ensure that all employees remain motivated is caring for their welfare. For example, progressive companies provide the best working environment for their employees. Many employees spend the majority of their daily hours at work. It is, therefore, no doubt that providing a nice work environment will improve employee morale and productivity. Most progressive companies also provide physical and mental health services for their employees. For example, Chevron Corporation, the American multinational energy corporation which is the second-largest oil company in America that provides significant perks and benefits that provide the employees several options for welfare and retirement benefits. The company provides health and insurance benefits like long-term disability insurance, Life Insurance, severance pay, Health Insurance, vision insurance, accidental death and disbursement insurance, and temporary disability insurance.

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