The University of Sydney
NSW 2006 Australia
ABN XXXXXXXXXX
CRICOS 00026A
REF: 20/6111
Dr Gwendolyn Hyslop
Educational Integrity Coordinator
Faculty of Arts and Social Sciences
E: XXXXXXXXXX
T: XXXXXXXXXX
4 August 2020
Dear AMANI MOHAMED HASSAN MOHAMED
SID: XXXXXXXXXX
I write to you regarding a possible
each of the University’s Academic Honesty in Coursework
Policy 2015 in relation to work you recently submitted for assessment in the unit of study
EDPA6015.
Specifically, your submission contains passages of text that do not appear to be your own
work. These passages contain the exact words of source material, which you have not
acknowledged with the use of quotation marks and/or the inclusion of an appropriate citation
to the relevant source/s. The affected text is indicated by coloured highlighting and/or
embedded comments in the marked up copy of your submission attached to this letter.
I have formed the preliminary view that you have potentially engaged in conduct contrary to
Part 3 (Academic Dishonesty and Plagiarism) of the Policy.
However, in light of your student record, I have also formed the view that your conduct is likely
to have been caused by your failure to fully understand referencing requirements rather than
dishonesty.
In accordance with the Academic Honesty Procedures 2016, you are now required to
complete an additional development course and submit a co
ected or alternative piece of
work in order to address the areas of concern identified in your original submission.
Please note that the resubmitted work will be eligible for a maximum mark of 100% of the total
available marks only.
Please see the instructions on the following page for further information on what you
are now required to do.
Once you have met these requirements, the matter will be resolved without a formal finding of
plagiarism or academic dishonesty recorded on your student file.
If you do not meet these requirements, you will be required to attend an interview with me to
formally respond to the allegation as formulated above.
If you would like further information about the issues identified with your work, please write to
the Faculty at the e-mail address shown at the top of this page.
For further information about and resources on academic honesty, please visit the
academic integrity pages of the University’s Cu
ent Students website.
Please ensure that you continue to attend classes and submit assessments as normal.
Sincerely,
mailto: XXXXXXXXXX
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Dr Gwendolyn Hyslop
Educational Integrity Coordinator
TO RESOLVE THIS MATTER
1. You must complete the Avoiding Plagiarism: Referencing and Incorporating
Sources module within the next seven (7) days.
To enrol in this course:
Log in to Canvas and enrol yourself in the module here:
https:
canvas.sydney.edu.au/enroll/6XRDB7
Select Enrol in this Course
Select Go to the Course
Instructions for completing the module are provided on the home page.
Please contact the Faculty immediately if you think you will be unable to complete
the course within the next seven (7) days. See contact details at the top of this
letter.
2. You are required to submit a co
ected version of your work, which must include all
necessary citations and additions to the reference list.
Please note that this is an educational opportunity only, so you must not make changes
eyond those indicated here. You are also required to resubmit the co
ected work even if
you have already received a mark for your original submission.
Please make the following co
ections to your work:
a. Substantially rewrite in your own words (i.e., paraphrase) the text shown in coloured
highlighting in the marked up copy of your submission attached to this letter.
. You may retain some quotations, but these should be used sparingly.
c. Wherever you have paraphrased or quoted words, ideas or information contained in
another source, you must insert an accurate citation to the specific source from which
this material came, including the relevant page numbe
s. You must also provide an
integrated list of references at the end of your submission.
d. For guidance on the appropriate formatting of citations and reference list entries,
please see http:
libguides.li
ary.usyd.edu.au/citation?hs=a.
e. You are not permitted to include any information that was not in the original
work.
Your resubmission is due by no later than 8am on Monday August 17th 2020.
Before resubmitting your work, we encourage you to attend a 20-minute consultation with one
of the Li
ary’s Peer Learning Advisors (PLAs) to discuss the specific referencing issues
identified in your assignment. Please email a copy of your Turnitin report and co
ected work
to XXXXXXXXXX prior to your meeting for discussion.
To book an appointment:
Log into Canvas and enrol yourself in the XXXXXXXXXXEducational Integrity Resubmissions
site: https:
canvas.sydney.edu.au/enroll/ECYNJN
Select Enrol in this Course
Select Go to the Course
Click to access the Course Calendar
https:
canvas.sydney.edu.au/enroll/6XRDB7
http:
libguides.li
ary.usyd.edu.au/citation?hs=a
mailto: XXXXXXXXXX
https:
canvas.sydney.edu.au/enroll/ECYNJN
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Find Appointment
Select location and time
Please note - all meetings will take place via Zoom until further notice.
To submit your co
ected or alternative piece of work:
Log into Canvas and enrol yourself in the XXXXXXXXXXEducational Integrity Resubmissions
site: https:
canvas.sydney.edu.au/enroll/ECYNJN (as above)
Select the relevant faculty button and submit your work
Instructions for submitting your work are provided on the home page.
Once you have made your submission, please forward a copy of your Turnitin submission
confirmation receipt to the e-mail address at the top of this letter.
https:
canvas.sydney.edu.au/enroll/ECYNJN
A critical literature review.docx
y Amani Mohamed
Submission date: 16-May XXXXXXXXXX:12PM (UTC+1000)
Submission ID: XXXXXXXXXX
File name: A_critical_literature_review.docx (26.29K)
Word count: 3466
Character count: 21847
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FINAL GRADE
0/60
A critical literature review.docx
GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructo
Research academic literature to write a literature
eview /10
Critically engage with educational leadership
literature and research /10
Display an understanding of key concepts and
theories /10
Apply theory to practice taking into account local
and global context /10
Critically reflect on your own understanding of
leadership purpose, and that of others /10
Analyse issues of identity and ethics in leadership
10
This assignment will be refe
ed for plagiarism
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Comment 1
This writing is descriptive rather than critical
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Comment 2
This is all from one unatttributed source and is not written by you
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Comment 3
Attribute these words to their owne
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Comment 4
This section is all copied from www.ukessays.com
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A critical literature review.docx
by Amani Mohamed
A critical literature review.docx
ORIGINALITY REPORT
PRIMARY SOURCES
A critical literature review.docx
GRADEMARK REPORT
FINAL GRADE
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor