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What does the writer do well in this assignment? (List one or more aspects, paying attention to thesis, audience, purpose, organization, and development). Also, please write the writer’s main claim or focus (thesis) according to what you have read.
What part(s) of the essay were a bit confusing? Why?
What specific suggestions (3 or fewer) do you have for revising the unclear parts of this writing? Please identify the paragraph for your suggestion. Below is a list of suggestions to give you ideas.
What would you like to know more about the topic that can enhance the essay and that supports the thesis?
What specific details do not work with the essay (e.g., doesn’t support the thesis) or can be moved within the essay?
Overall, what new information have you learned or how are you thinking differently after this reading?

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Sourav Kumar · Accepted Answer

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Smith Chelsea: The writer talks about racial discrimination in the field of public education. She then goes on to talk about the LRSD school system and how the current changes would take things back to how there were before, i.e., would re-introduce segregation of students on the basis of their colour. The writer has done a good job at providing a lot of examples to emphasize her topic of discussion, which makes it easier to understand the topic.
Lett Julie: The writer talks about the legal age of drinking in the USA, and talks about why it should be lowered from 21 to 18. She provides the reader with strong opinions on why it would be a good idea to legalise 18 as a drinking age, using different social and statistical examples.
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Smith Chelsea: The essay became a bit confusing towards the end , especially the last two paragraphs,

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