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Annotate your finished draft to show the techniques you have used: MISSING

Underline your hook.
Highlight transition words in yellow.
Highlight domain specific and precise language in green.
Highlight figurative language used in pink.
Highlight references to your graphic representation in blue.

Your draft will be evaluated according to the Drafting Your Argument rubric. Make sure to revise your paper and that 4.09 has followed these revisions!

See attached 4.08 essay please make revisions that need to be made to the essay above once that's done fill out 4.09. you will need to make all revisions in essay and they use the draft from 4.08 and the newly revision to complete 4.09

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4.08 Drafting Your Argument
In New York City obesity has become one of the significant epidemics in the recent period. On healthy eating and drinking habits have been seriously affecting the health benefits and wellbeing of the citizens in New York. It has been reported that citizens of New York are developing obesity in their early life, and it is an alarming concern that even the school children are suffering from obesity. The factors that are leading to obesity in children and the other citizens are effectively analyzed in this assessment. Primarily it is obvious to note that obesity refers to a complex condition that can occur due to social and physical environment, genetics, medical history and behaviors like poor diet and physical inactivity. Effective efforts regarding nutrition and physical activity can be implemented in order to solve these issues. This particular assessment draws two claims. Counterpoints and rebuttal points are also drawn associated to the claimed statement. 
Soda needs to be banned in New York city to fight the harmful effects of obesity that are affecting the health condition of children and adult citizens of the country. Soda contains high level sugar that mixes with the blood and if it is not properly digested, it can cause diabetes cholesterol and other harmful diseases on the citizens. There is a high possibility for the people to be affected by this disease and it has already been pointed out that most of the people in America are highly obese. In many cases, it is influenced by the environment and the peers “The reasoning is simple: as societies become more obese, individual attitudes towards being overweight change, with the acceptance of being overweight increasing and even ideal weight perceptions changing. Thus, both mean and desired body weights among adult Americans have increased from 1994 to 2002” (Rundle et al.). 
On the other hand, it is also to be notified that so the consumption is not the only factor that advance behind New York's obesity epidemic but there are other underlying factors and lack of healthy lifestyle condition that are to be blamed. “Among 4,

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